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Spitfire DSO
08-16-2008, 03:52 PM
Strawberry Spritzer
By. Amanda L. Marron

Sweet strawberry, tantalizing my tongue
Ripened to perfection
A juicy anodyne after a long day
With sugar and seltzer
It's a berry blast in my mouth
Excellente!
The redolent aroma invades
Mesmerized, I inhale
A pleasant delight
Retaliating on my tastebuds

Sniperess DSO
08-18-2008, 10:00 AM
that's cute! I really like the word usage. Very vivid! :mavclap: